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May 1, 2025Letâs be real: most cover letters sound like they were written by a robotâor someone trying way too hard to impress. They start with âTo Whom It May Concern,â follow with a list of buzzwords, and end with a dry sentence about how much theyâd âappreciate the opportunity to interview.â
And then they get ignored.
Hereâs the truth: a great cover letter can give you the edgeâif it actually sounds human, relevant, and personal.
Letâs break down how to write a cover letter that doesnât suck, doesnât ramble, and doesnât get tossed in the virtual trash.
â What a Generic Cover Letter Looks Like
âTo Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to express my interest in the open position at your esteemed company. I believe I am a perfect fit due to my strong work ethic and communication skills…â
If that sounds familiar, youâre not alone. But hiring managers see hundreds of theseâand none of them stand out.
Why? Because they:
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Say nothing specific
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Sound like a template
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Could apply to literally any job
Thatâs not a letterâitâs a formality.
â What a Good Cover Letter Actually Does
A strong cover letter should:
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Show that you understand the company and the role
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Highlight how your background fits this position
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Add personality and clarity to your application
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Make the hiring manager want to learn more about you
âïž 5 Tips to Make Your Cover Letter Count
1. Start With a Real Hook
Your first sentence should make them keep reading, not sound like a copy-paste job.
âWhen I saw your listing for a marketing coordinator, I immediately recognized the overlap between your mission and my experience building brand campaigns that actually convert.â
Or:
âIâve spent the last three years managing chaosâotherwise known as customer service in retailâand Iâd love to bring that patience and organization to your front desk team.â
2. Mention the Company by Nameâand Why You Care
Hiring managers can tell if you wrote this letter just for themâor just changed the company name.
âWhat stood out to me about [Company Name] was your focus on community-driven solutions. That mission aligns perfectly with how I approach client workâŠâ
Even one sentence of specific connection makes a difference.
3. Match Your Tone to the Industry
If itâs a corporate finance job, keep it formal.
If itâs a creative role or a small business, you can be more conversational.
Donât be afraid to sound like a real person. It makes you readableâand more memorable.
4. Tell a Mini Story or Give an Example
You donât need to restate your resumeâuse your letter to add color or context.
âWhile managing a seasonal team of 12 during a chaotic holiday rush, I learned how to lead with empathy and efficiencyâand still hit every sales goal.â
This gives proof that youâre not just listing buzzwordsâyouâve lived them.
5. End With Confidence, Not Desperation
Donât beg. Donât apologize. Donât over-explain. End strong.
âIâd welcome the opportunity to contribute to your team and bring value from day one. Letâs connect soon.â
Thatâs better than:
âThank you for your time and consideration. I hope youâll look at my resume.â
You’re offering valueânot asking for a favor.
đ Final Thought: Be Human. Be Relevant. Be Specific.
A great cover letter isnât about writing the perfect paragraphâitâs about showing the hiring manager that you:
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Understand what theyâre looking for
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Bring something real to the table
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Arenât just throwing spaghetti at the job board wall
If your cover letter sounds like youâand only youâyouâve already pulled ahead of 80% of applicants.
đŁ Need a Cover Letter That Sounds Like YouâBut Better?
At Twin Rivers Communications, I write custom, job-targeted cover letters that:
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Speak to the actual role
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Sound natural and confident
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Align with your resume and goals
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Get hiring managers to actually read your resume
đ Call or text 321-578-8133 to get started.